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I enjoyed this... It was like reading a short film... it was realistic without
trying too hard... good people watching... the story moved as smoothly as real
life...

nd
11/18/05

Well done. Niether sentimental nor pretensious, yet meaningfull. Well laid out.
Strong, clear prose. The characters are brought about through visceral writing.
Good instincts. Must have had fine field notes. The simple images juxtaposed
with lucid comentary bring us into the bowling alley.We feel the power and
significance that Tuesday Night Mixed has on people and their lives.

Jon Dillingham
8/16/03

Yeah, mother... haven't read the whole thing because am going out to
dinner but big ups from the west end from just getting up. Will read it and say
" it's pretty good" because you're my friend and that's what they do but i bet
it's pretty good for real and will get back to you soon about it. A story, you
shuould be proud.

Reid
8/4/03

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